The first poetry it's about flowers:
The colorful flowers
Like the color of beautiful paint
With many color
Red, White, and pink
Make the sky looks elegant
All the color of the flower have special meaning
The Red flower shows that you are strong of fire and blood, they would be energy, war, danger, straight, and power. The red flower very emotionally intense color.
The white flower that you are sacred and patient
The pink flower that you are fun and exciting
The second poetry it's about bee come to flower:
The Bee with the wings
try to take the honey on the flower
Like monster try to eat something on the big hole
And then If we are disrupt the monster
You will be died
because the sting of the monster
The last poetry it's about the statue in the peace park:
The big face on the peace park
Make me feel about the black ghost
Inside of the statue
Many spirit try to get out on it
Wow! Bening. It is so nice to see you play with language using poetry. You have done a fantastic job.
ReplyDeleteI love how you used the images of, "fire and blood, they would be energy, war, danger" to describe red. It really gives your poem energy. Maybe next time you can just compare the flowers to fire or blood.
I think you are beginning to understand what I mean about figurative. Lot's of good images about ghosts and monsters.
Do you like poetry? You seem to have a talent.