Explanation About Simple Sentence

Today in ESL class, we learn about simple sentence. Mr. Jabiz told us that we must make explanation about what you learn so far about simple sentence, so I make a simple explanation about it... Lets watching!! I hope you have fun!!!

Edit My Inquirer And The Grammer

Yesterday, in my ESL class now I learn about simple sentence and compound sentence. Simple sentence is a complete though or idea . Simple sentence must have subject, thing, person, place, idea and action. The sentence who have capital letter and full stop in the end. Compound sentence is opposite of fragment is run on sentence two sentences smashed incorrectly.

I think I need to edit my inquirer because I have many mistakes. This is the old one :

I was curious about why people like smoke? and why people make cigarette. I wait 4 years to some one answer it, because I always saw many people smoke and then they have disease, do you think its true? its make harm to your self or your age will be short.

When I go to my grandma house suddenly, in the street is traffic. You can look many people walk and smoke, when I open my car glass I smell the smoke and I cough, its was so creepy.
That is many impact to people like If you smell the smoke you can sick rite?? and smoke can impact too in the world. I always asked to my mom and my dad they just said " it just for fun maybe some one stress and they want don't know what can they do so they do something else"

Some reasons said cigarette can make people do again and again its like if you smoke first time you will get the second time, of course its make you sick to your body. This is the first time I tell you my curious question. I have second question, this is still about smoke, Why they mother agree it?
You know many teenage smoke including a child and the mother agree it, I think its was creepy.

Lets watch my movie !!

This is the new one that I already edit :

I was curious about why people like to smoke? and why people make cigarette. I wait 4 years to some one answer it. I always saw many people smoke and then they have disease. Do you think its true? It makes harm to your self and your age will be short.

When I go to my grandma house, suddenly in the street is traffic. You can look many people walk and smoke. When I open my car glass, I smell the smoke and I cough, it’s been so creepy.

That is much impact to people. If you smell the smoke, you can sick rite. Smoke can impact in the world. I always asked to my mom and my dad, they just said " it just for fun maybe some one stress and they don't know what can they do, so they do something else"

Some reasons said cigarette could make people do again and again. Its like if you smoke first time you will get the second time, of course its make you sick to your body. This is the first time I tell you my curious question. I have second question. This is still about smoke. Why they mother agree it?

You know many teenage smokes including a child and the mothers agree it, I think it’s been creepy.

ADVERB

In my ESL class now I'm doing about adverb. Then, I make cartoon about it. Let's watching !

Verb

In my ESL class after I do adjective now, I'm do about verb, verb is an action. I will make the example about it. Lets watch:

Adjective

After all done to do nouns. Mr.Jabiz teach us about adjective, like part of adjective and the meaning of adjective. After we know all about adjective I find that meaning about adjective is the word that describe nouns and I make movie about adjective. Let's watch !

The last step about adjective is answer the question. The first answer is  I think I was successful because I already know about adjective and the steps about where can I make this movie and where can I record this movie,  I think I little like this project because I'm not sure about my face  in my video but if I said the favorite part in my movie is when I tell you about example of adjective and when I added the song of my video.

Inquirer

I was curious about why people like smoke? and why people make cigarette. I wait 4 years to some one answer it, because I always saw many people smoke and then they have disease, do you think its true? its make harm to your self or your age will be short.

When I go to my grandma house suddenly, in the street is traffic. You can look many people walk and smoke, when I open my car glass I smell the smoke and I cough, its was so creepy.
That is many impact to people like If you smell the smoke you can sick rite?? and smoke can impact too in the world. I always asked to my mom and my dad they just said " it just for fun maybe some one stress and they want don't know what can they do so they do something else"

Some reasons said cigarette can make people do again and again its like if you smoke first time you will get the second time, of course its make you sick to your body. This is the first time I tell you my curious question. I have second question, this is still about smoke, Why they mother agree it?.

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You know many teenage smoke including a child and the mother agree it, I  think its was creepy.